Comments on: IELTS Essay Masterclass | Lesson 1 Replay https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2021/11/17/ielts-essay-masterclass-lesson-1-replay/ IELTS Preparation Courses Sun, 16 Apr 2023 15:34:49 +0000 hourly 1 By: Neil https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2021/11/17/ielts-essay-masterclass-lesson-1-replay/#comment-49955 Fri, 21 Jan 2022 17:48:52 +0000 https://ieltsadvantage.com/?p=1716131#comment-49955 In reply to Fatimah.

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By: Fatimah https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2021/11/17/ielts-essay-masterclass-lesson-1-replay/#comment-49947 Thu, 20 Jan 2022 19:32:43 +0000 https://ieltsadvantage.com/?p=1716131#comment-49947 Fatimah

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By: Hla Khine https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2021/11/17/ielts-essay-masterclass-lesson-1-replay/#comment-49671 Wed, 22 Dec 2021 16:45:55 +0000 https://ieltsadvantage.com/?p=1716131#comment-49671 Nowadays, many adolescents prefer to spend time with their peers rather than their families. This change is because of a lack of open talk in family and this issue can be erased by setting up a family time in every single day.

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By: Jumaine https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2021/11/17/ielts-essay-masterclass-lesson-1-replay/#comment-49436 Tue, 30 Nov 2021 13:04:49 +0000 https://ieltsadvantage.com/?p=1716131#comment-49436 In reply to Craig Furlong.

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By: Jumaine https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2021/11/17/ielts-essay-masterclass-lesson-1-replay/#comment-49435 Tue, 30 Nov 2021 13:01:39 +0000 https://ieltsadvantage.com/?p=1716131#comment-49435 In reply to Craig Furlong.

Hi there, a comma is not needed because the coordinating conjunction is not joining two independent clauses. It was a stylistic choice made by the writer.

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By: Jumaine https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2021/11/17/ielts-essay-masterclass-lesson-1-replay/#comment-49416 Tue, 30 Nov 2021 10:25:53 +0000 https://ieltsadvantage.com/?p=1716131#comment-49416 In reply to Ijas.

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By: Jumaine https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2021/11/17/ielts-essay-masterclass-lesson-1-replay/#comment-49410 Mon, 29 Nov 2021 14:50:39 +0000 https://ieltsadvantage.com/?p=1716131#comment-49410 In reply to Bincy.

You’re very welcome!

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By: Ijas https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2021/11/17/ielts-essay-masterclass-lesson-1-replay/#comment-49398 Sun, 28 Nov 2021 15:14:09 +0000 https://ieltsadvantage.com/?p=1716131#comment-49398 Nowadays, adolescence are hanging around with their friends more than their family members. This is because they feel comfortable and free to do whatever they like when with same age group and parents shouldn’t restrict them to stay home.

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By: Bincy https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2021/11/17/ielts-essay-masterclass-lesson-1-replay/#comment-49388 Sat, 27 Nov 2021 10:36:10 +0000 https://ieltsadvantage.com/?p=1716131#comment-49388 Thank you

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By: Craig Furlong https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2021/11/17/ielts-essay-masterclass-lesson-1-replay/#comment-49382 Fri, 26 Nov 2021 23:51:06 +0000 https://ieltsadvantage.com/?p=1716131#comment-49382 In your first example, I don’t like “employed people”. Your thoughts? Maybe, “employees”? Or stick with “working people” or just “workers”?

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