Comments on: Teenage Years – IELTS Task 2 Essay https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/06/18/some-people-think-that-the-teenage-years-are-the-happiest-time-of-most-peoples-lives-ielts-general-training-task-2-essay/ IELTS Preparation Courses Tue, 18 Apr 2023 13:55:23 +0000 hourly 1 By: Emily https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/06/18/some-people-think-that-the-teenage-years-are-the-happiest-time-of-most-peoples-lives-ielts-general-training-task-2-essay/#comment-46496 Mon, 26 Apr 2021 08:37:01 +0000 http://humorous-knowledge.flywheelsites.com/?p=1533#comment-46496 In reply to Ruth Chambers.

But isn’t this a discussion essay where you have to discuss both sides impartially first? So you should also acknowledge and discuss why adults may be happier in life. But in this sample essay, you only discussed one side= why teenagers are happier= why adults are unhappier

]]> By: Matt https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/06/18/some-people-think-that-the-teenage-years-are-the-happiest-time-of-most-peoples-lives-ielts-general-training-task-2-essay/#comment-44357 Thu, 13 Aug 2020 13:55:28 +0000 http://humorous-knowledge.flywheelsites.com/?p=1533#comment-44357 In reply to Iffat.

Hi there, thanks for your comment!

Yes, you will benefit from having an outline statement. If you don’t include a sentence outlining what your essay will say, the examiner doesn’t really know what you are going to write about in the rest of your essay. This will also lose you marks.

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]]> By: Matt https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/06/18/some-people-think-that-the-teenage-years-are-the-happiest-time-of-most-peoples-lives-ielts-general-training-task-2-essay/#comment-44356 Thu, 13 Aug 2020 13:52:28 +0000 http://humorous-knowledge.flywheelsites.com/?p=1533#comment-44356 In reply to Iffat.

Hi there! Thanks for your comment. Unfortunately, I’m not 100% sure what you’re asking. Can you please rephrase your comment?

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]]> By: Iffat https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/06/18/some-people-think-that-the-teenage-years-are-the-happiest-time-of-most-peoples-lives-ielts-general-training-task-2-essay/#comment-44346 Thu, 13 Aug 2020 04:38:15 +0000 http://humorous-knowledge.flywheelsites.com/?p=1533#comment-44346 Sir I have a question about this essay.in introduction outline is necessary or not?in this essay you say I will discuss……is it necessary to add in introduction?some others samples you did not add this type outline.plz tell me I am confused

]]> By: Iffat https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/06/18/some-people-think-that-the-teenage-years-are-the-happiest-time-of-most-peoples-lives-ielts-general-training-task-2-essay/#comment-44345 Thu, 13 Aug 2020 04:34:03 +0000 http://humorous-knowledge.flywheelsites.com/?p=1533#comment-44345 Yes

]]> By: Ruth Chambers https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/06/18/some-people-think-that-the-teenage-years-are-the-happiest-time-of-most-peoples-lives-ielts-general-training-task-2-essay/#comment-37990 Mon, 28 Oct 2019 11:47:46 +0000 http://humorous-knowledge.flywheelsites.com/?p=1533#comment-37990 In reply to Jot.

You do not need to talk about adults being happier in life. As Chris mentioned, you can choose to say that both adults and teenagers are happy and give a balanced view, but this approach is more difficult and can often lead to a confused essay.
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]]> By: Jot https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/06/18/some-people-think-that-the-teenage-years-are-the-happiest-time-of-most-peoples-lives-ielts-general-training-task-2-essay/#comment-37868 Tue, 22 Oct 2019 12:49:33 +0000 http://humorous-knowledge.flywheelsites.com/?p=1533#comment-37868 I think you do not mention why adults are happer in their life……….why?????…..because in both viewpoint essay we have discuss both ….

]]> By: Yanmi Gelati https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/06/18/some-people-think-that-the-teenage-years-are-the-happiest-time-of-most-peoples-lives-ielts-general-training-task-2-essay/#comment-24617 Thu, 23 Feb 2017 05:18:13 +0000 http://humorous-knowledge.flywheelsites.com/?p=1533#comment-24617 Adults are closed off and the activities they partake in are boring, as are their interactions. Adolescence is special. Life is not that great afterwards, unless you have low standards. I can’t be satisfied with unskilled labor and Netflix. Yes, the untalented and perpetually disinterested will have to take unskilled labor or hit the street. Twenties are a good time to catch the bus; let not the cruel adult world take any years of your life, don’t betray the last shred of your dignity.

]]> By: misbah zia https://www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/06/18/some-people-think-that-the-teenage-years-are-the-happiest-time-of-most-peoples-lives-ielts-general-training-task-2-essay/#comment-1115 Thu, 18 Jun 2015 11:34:17 +0000 http://humorous-knowledge.flywheelsites.com/?p=1533#comment-1115 It is often argued that the most joyful time periode of many people’s is a adolescense life,while some critics argued that grownup time is bring more happiness despite burden of job and life responsbilities.It is agreed that teenage’s life is the most happiest and jubilant.The essay will first discuss how adult are less radiant than teenagers because of pressure under they work,second it will address that how teenagers are more elated.

As people cross immaturity and step in maturity life,adults come around a hail of responsibilities and pressure.Because firstly marital status get changef with increasing expensis in limited pay.Moreover,tutition fees for further progress in life makes adulthood very much depressing.It is disagreed that grownups life bring jubilant life.For example,it was revealed in Psychology journal of UK in 2013 that adulthood mood elevation neurotransmitter was 35% lower than teenagers.

On the other hand,adolescence is the most fulfilled life because at this age ,parents are totally caregivers and pay all the bills ,taxes,rent and tutition fees,above all,it is the time to enjoy every moment of life .It is agreed that the teenagers life is the mosr elated time of life.For instance,it was stated in The Newyork Times that 45%brilliant ideas come from the teenagers life due to joyfulness and taken everything light-hearted.

In conclusion,the real charm of life is in immaturity ,while the most gloomy and depressing life is adulthood.

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